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Never Danced by ~ThornedRose:iconThornedRose:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Cheap or Tawdry Romance > Ballad




Have you never danced before?
Truly?
Then allow me
I'll show you how to dance

First you step in closer
closer... don't be scared
I would never hurt you
you know I wouldn't dare

Next I'll take your hand
place one around your waist
no no, keep looking up
you just watch my face

Now I'll step towards you
and you'll have to step back
Yes! that's the way
exactly like that

The rest is pretty simple
just mirror all I do
Wait, I'll put up some music
and then I'll dance with you

I probably shouldn't tell you this
but usually it gets a little intimate
am I speaking from experience?
well maybe just a little bit

You're sure you want me to show you?
Have you never really been kissed?
Alright then, close your eyes
it goes a little like this....
©2004-2009 ~ThornedRose
:iconthornedrose:

Author's Comments

And now for a bit lighter poem

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~JackLeaf Oct 21, 2004, 12:09:25 AM
Heh, interesting concept. I like the idea how (s)he teaches the other gal/guy to dance. Good work! :)

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Purrr.
:iconthornedrose:
~ThornedRose Oct 21, 2004, 1:48:35 AM
Thanks :) and the way I pictured it when I wrote it was that the guy teached the girl how to dance... but I guess that you could take that the other way around ^^

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In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconkeizie:
~Keizie Oct 21, 2004, 4:17:40 AM
Sounds like a children song :) really sweet :)

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Every time I want a thorough conversation, I attract wankers :confused:

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My website -> :) [link]
:iconthornedrose:
~ThornedRose Oct 21, 2004, 4:22:56 AM
Thank you very muts ^_~

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconbrutalcorpse:
~brutalcorpse Oct 21, 2004, 10:04:13 PM
haha..yeh that is pretty awesome.. slick and sly..I need to be more like that..

very fun poem indeed

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::scribbles::
:iconthornedrose:
~ThornedRose Oct 21, 2004, 10:19:57 PM
Thank you ^_^

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconlunatikpiper:
~lunatikpiper Oct 23, 2004, 10:00:39 AM
Ooh!!! I really like this one, it's grrrrreat!
:iconthornedrose:
~ThornedRose Oct 23, 2004, 10:03:32 AM
thhhhanks :)

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconnenriki-taishite-asu:
~nenriki-taishite-asu Feb 18, 2005, 5:47:56 PM
probably my favorite. I love to dance, so this really touched my heart. I love it.

--
"Art washes from the soul the dust of every life."
-Pablo Picasso
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