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Thin red lines run through my eyes
Small drops of salt glide down my face
I hold my fists clenched when I try
But I can not forget about those days

When we were together
All used to be fine
I will love you forever
But you left me in time

No such thing as heaven
True love does not exist
There is a hell however
Cause I'm sure that this is it

I should forget about you
And all the pain you've caused
But as soon as I try to
I know its you I love

Thin red lines move across my chest
A few inches remain to be carved
Against my skin the knife is pressed
But I can not cut you from my heart
©2005-2009 ~ThornedRose
:iconthornedrose:

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:icondarkanddead:
verry nice. i love that ending.
:iconthornedrose:
Thank you, for liking it and for taking the time to comment ^^;

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconfullofwishes:
This is just beautiful, so serene. I love it :)
:iconthornedrose:
Thank you ^^; sorry I took so long to reply to your comment, please don't think that I appreciate them any less :blushes:

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconfullofwishes:
Of course not! And you're welcome ;)
:iconnenriki-taishite-asu:
Absolutely beautiful. The end is perfect. Defintely a fav! Keep up the awesome work!

--
"Art washes from the soul the dust of every life."
-Pablo Picasso
:iconthornedrose:
Heh, thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it and that you consider it fav-worthy

--
In this Time of Despair.
When all that you love is dead.
It's my desireless game to be alive.
I'm trying to get well.
And no more cryin' for the end.
A desireless way to be alive.
:iconkuroikochou15:
I have added it to my favorites as well. Good poem.

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